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AsukaHotaru's avatar

Shalini, this felt like watching someone open a cosmic diary and let the pages flutter out into the wind — little girl, wise woman, green-eyed wonder, all tangled together in the sweetest, most chaotic dance. I adored the way you let yourself shrink and expand from line to line, like you’re trying on different versions of yourself to see which one fits today.

Your whole poem moves like someone pacing through a dream asking, “Wait… does any of this make sense?” and somehow the confusion becomes its own kind of beauty. The way you talk about truth flipping, certainty dissolving, saints contradicting, yesterday arguing with today — it’s wonderfully human. You made not-knowing feel like an adventure instead of a failure.

And that image of heaven laughing at our seriousness? Perfect. Like the universe is gently nudging us and saying, “Relax, you dramatic earthlings, you’re doing your best.”

A playful, searching, delightfully unraveled piece — like holding a snow globe full of questions and shaking it just to watch the glitter fall.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like someone holding up a mirror and seeing both child and adult reflected at once.

It begins with wonder stars twinkling, the moon shyly glowing innocence still alive inside.

The speaker admits that certainty has collapsed, leaving only questions, upside‑down truths, fragile doubts.

There is longing to run, to play with angels, to resist the labels of age and time.

The voice trembles between awe and fragility, confessing to feeling small, belittled, like a green pea.

Illusion becomes the thread: what we think we know dissolves, leaving us blindfolded in a shifting world.

Each day overturns the last, right and wrong changing places, wisdom and foolishness trading masks.

The divine perspective is imagined as laughter, watching human pride stumble with a single slip.

Life itself is pictured as a puzzle box, too vast for one lifetime to unravel.

And in the end, the poem is a plea for peace a reminder that truth may be mystery, yet wonder remains.

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