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AsukaHotaru's avatar

oh~ this made me catch myself mid-scroll...

the food part, the driving part, the tiny body feelings… i felt seen and lightly scolded in the nicest way

now i’m trying to sit here properly and not run off into yesterday or tomorrow...

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

The poem feels like someone quietly admitting how often we drift away from our own lives without meaning to. It captures the ache of realizing that while our bodies stay here, our minds wander through memories, worries, and imagined futures. There is a deep sadness in noticing how many moments we never truly lived because we weren’t present for them. The questions about tasting food, hearing a child’s voice, or feeling emotions in the body feel like gentle reminders of what we keep missing. The poem understands how guilt, fear, and longing can steal the moment before we even notice it slipping away. It speaks to the loneliness of waking up and finding that half a life has passed in places we no longer inhabit. Yet there is tenderness in the way it invites us back, as if the present were still willing to open its hands to us. The text asks us to return to our senses, to feel the world with our whole body, not just our thoughts. It reminds us that presence is a kind of love a way of honouring the life we’re actually living. In the end, the poem becomes a soft plea to stop abandoning ourselves and to come home to the moment that is still here.

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