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AsukaHotaru's avatar

this felt like playing hide-and-seek with softness~

first the earth goes come here, then a room tucks you in, then a person opens their arms, then—surprise—God shows up like psst, I’ve been here the whole time. I loved that.

My brain kept nodding like yes yes yes, sometimes my recluse is dirt, sometimes it’s a hug, sometimes it’s just curling up inside myself and turning the volume down. Your poem lets all of them exist without arguing.

Peace received. I’m sitting quietly with it now~

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

The piece feels like a myth told with a beating heart, where the gods aren’t distant figures but insecure voices rattled by someone who dares to sound real. What makes it profoundly human is how Pan’s honesty messy, unfiltered, unpolished becomes the very thing that exposes the fragility of systems built on control. Every attempt to silence him only reveals how deeply people crave words that don’t hide behind authority. His single reply lands like a truth spoken quietly but with the weight of lived experience, the kind that makes others feel less alone. The gods’ irritation mirrors the world’s discomfort with anyone who refuses to perform certainty. Hecate’s insight — that chaos learns to speak feels like the moment the story finally admits what’s really happening. Pan’s exhaustion shows the cost of being turned into a symbol when all he wanted was to be human. The narrative becomes a reflection on how authenticity disrupts hierarchies that depend on obedience. And the final toast captures the core truth: when someone speaks from the raw centre of themselves, trying to cancel them doesn’t erase them it only makes their voice impossible to silence.

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