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This reflection feels like a parable of confinement, where a locked closet becomes the soul’s trial.

The thin space beneath the door is hope itself, a fragile passage toward freedom and light.

Yoga, fasting, meditation, and prayer are imagined as ways to endure, to keep despair at bay.

Yet the poem humanises struggle by asking whether strength alone can break the barrier of fear.

The presence of someone outside with the key transforms the metaphor into dialogue with God.

It asks whether freedom is earned through obedience or claimed through authenticity of self.

The closet becomes a mirror of our choices, while eternity waits patiently beyond the door.

God’s key is not force but invitation, a question of readiness to step into life’s fullness.

The poem humanises eternity as both sanctuary and marketplace, a space of belonging and choice.

Ultimately, Eternity whispers that liberation is not escape but acceptance stepping beyond fear into love.

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